I created an account just to leave a comment on this game haha. I ADORE this so far. I'm very excited to see what comes next. Such a subtle building of potential romantic tension, the more tender take on traditionally hyper-masculine characters, etc. Very big fan of this so far! <3
I'm not sure if anyone's caught this error already: Regardless of where you select for the scar to be, in the personal profile, it always says that it's across the knee.
Thanks so much for making this! I really love it so far. I hope its alright that we mentioned your story in our list of recommended twine games ^_^ it's especially good and deserves to be acknowledged! You can find it in the thread here--> https://itch.io/t/1910939/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-2
was a bit bothered reading an unpleasant post here in the comments, and just want to again express my appreciation for this story and its writer.
Ive loved reading tales of King Arthur and the Knights of the Round table since I was old enough to read. And as much as I loved reading them, I never thought I'd ever get to experience any of the tales the way others did, Imagining myself as the "queen" that Arthur was so In love with, Or as one of the Knights secretly involved with the queen or even the king himself! This story and another Im following (Bastard of Camelot) have really opened up that fantasy for me. Not only that but I think each is adding something new to the stories in their own way (as is traditional for every new Arthurian story, something new, or some twist that wasnt thought of before, that makes coming back over and over again to the same characters worth it.)
So again Id like to say thank you for sharing this with us. I really appreciate your effort and your take on the story.
Small problem, but, during the character creation, when you set your scar to be on your eyebrow, the personal profile states it as a "scar across your knee" instead
Can't appercite a masterpiece that's on you,it's your loss but do learn some emphaty..honestly,its alright if doesn't sit well with your preferences but if you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all,you could have presented constructive crtisicm but no you have to take a tone that was both bigoted and demaning to both the writer and the community the wanted to create represention for..it wasnt cringe it was represtation and I for one appercited it piss off none likes a queerphobie
thanks for sharing this with us. I just finished my second read through, this time with the added content. I can say that I both enjoyed alot of it, and yet at the same time had a hard time getting into the MC so to speak.
I tend to self insert in these kind of games, but I find it hard to "be" this character. Im uncomfortable playing a trained knight/killer type character. Im not martially or physically minded, in fact quiet the opposite. So this skin is hard for me to wear (it itches metaphorically speaking.) The forced wedding bit is something I can role play with, I'd just sullenly go along with it. But I find that even as a "mute" my character talks and responds too much to others. I dont think anyone really in that sort of position who was honestly unhappy about it, would just carry on casual banter like that. I could see my self responding with only hesitant head nods while keeping my eyes down cast, or looking away in refusal (or 180 degrees opposite and being sarcastic as all get out and generally unpleasant, but Im not that kind of person either.)
Not asking you to do anything about any of this, just sharing my experiences with the game so far. I knew when i first decided to give this a go that it was coming from an angle that I dont usually approach things from. Still Im glad to have read it, as honestly your writing is extremely well done and Im still hoping Ill find a way to get over my (character's) sullen self and find happiness in this unfortunate situation.
Hi! I saw your other post and I am very happy you are enjoying my take on the Arthurian legends❤
The difficulty you encountered as fas as immersion goes might take root in some pre-set traits the MC has. Some of them are due to the environment while growing up (for example MC is very capable in combat because they were intensly physically trained) and some of them are just character traits that are going to be fixed (for example MC's weakness for children and animals). Because of this, if sometimes you will come across some things that might feel strange to you, that's probably because it's one of the main character's fixed traits.
At this point in time MC is also still heavily influenced by their parents' expectations to go along with the marriage as best as they can; again, this is probably why you felt like MC was being too responsive or accepting. There are some choices for someone who just wants to get it over with without too much involvement (ex: choosing to eat alone and to not ask any question to Morien), maybe you'd be more comfortable with them?
In any case, thank you for your comments, your input is appreciated!
thanks for the response and insight. As I said I knew when i decided to play that it was with a MC that was somewhat preset in their origins, and that I would not be very comfortable with being that kind of person. Still I chose to play anyways, because well how can I pass on a chance to play an interactive Arthurian Tale lol.
Your story really is well written, and I've enjoyed it for the most part. I simply choose to ignore as best I can all references to my combat abilities / past etc. and focus on the Now part of the game (and i do like some of the characters predefined traits, like enjoying children and animals.) Its not too hard to do, its like playing an otome and ignoring all references to the MC being a girl. The mind can leap through alot of hoops when it wants to.
I've played this through a few times now - really enjoyed the release of the second half of the first chapter and I spent way too much time last night going through your tumblr reading all the info there. Love this so much, can't wait to see where you take it.
This is very good and i'm glad followed for the update but i have a question, for the option of a trans man can you only do binding or hormone treatments and not both? Otherwise this is very good and i'll wait excitedly for chapter 2!
Hi❤ I am so glad you liked the update! As for your question: I am probably going to add the option to do both in the next bugfix. Either that or it will be available in later chapter to choose to also take hormones if your MC binds and viceversa.
Thank you for the clarification! Love your work and how caring you've made all the characters! There's no hate or drama with any of the characters and they all genuinely care for each other from the get-go and it's so nice to see! I hope you take as much time as you need to be happy with the next par that you put out and I'm excited to see what happens next!
This is just my opinion, so I apologize if it upsets anyone but so far this story is just... King Arthur and his knights are very feminine. Having the King, who just won a war, calling people dears, apologizing to servants and braiding peoples hair is a very strange thing to see. So far every character is essentially the same, they're all lovey dovey and super caring. No one seems bothered by the child of their enemy they just defeated in war coming to their castle and marrying their king, everyone seems more content with making MC comfortable and happy
Alas this story is not for me, I can't take it seriously.
It's totally understandable to have preferences and in fact if something is not within your tastes you have every right to find something else that is!
Just to provide a possible explanation, I want to say that this story is not meant to be realistic. It is meant to address some tropes I hold dear to me and to portray character in a way I personally enjoy writing. Hopefully I can provide a different kind of experience than other stories with a similar setting.
In any case, TKH has soft characters that will always be understanding and attentive to MC's comfort, so anyone who keeps reading or is interested in this game should be aware of that.
Short and sweet. I'm hooked by your writing. I was hoping it was longer than half a chapter but it was so worth it. Good luck and please, please, PLEASE write more.
I really don't like to be the generic guy in the comments but I'm falling in love with this demo. It's well polished and the flow of the story never really stumbles very wonderful read ^-^
Is from the ashes we rise playable now or will be in the future?, because you are actually the first person to let us be a dragon let alone a shape-shifting one. But I am really enjoying this game so far. Need more like those 2.
Great story I really look forward for next updates.
Some spoilers ahead ** I just wanna say please don't force this marriage on MC or make it a option to IDK be super loyal to him but not necessarily his spouse I know Arthur is a nice guy and probably won't force himself on MC but he probably needs a heir and the concept of having an affair if I don't like Arthur that way doesn't sit right with me.
Hi❤ thank you for leaving this comment because I'll hopefully be able to clarify some things to you.
While the arranged marriage isn't avoidable, in this setting is very common as a practice, especially for monarchs and nobles, this game will heavily drift away from the more uncomfortable sides of it.
There won't be any expectation of a children or pressures by the court because Arthur has already named his heir. Since MC is gender selectable, it is also taken into consideration that the marriage was never for the purpose of producing an heir.
On the topic of MC, they have the freedom to have a purely platonic relationship with Arthur. Should they choose to pursue other ROs, or no one at all, Arthur will be helpful and supportive either way. Basically, the bond that MC and Arthur have is set and will always be a strong and central point in the story, but not linked to Arthur's romance route!
the amount of customization this game has is amazing. It's only the first half of the first chapter, but man, i am totally floored by this demo! I really loved that there's an option for mc to know sign 😌 can't wait to read more o(╥﹏╥)o
Saw this last night in tumblr, but just recently had the time to try it out! And in all honesty, I love what we got to read right not. ^^ I love how heartwarming the story and characters are despite the story most likely going down the route of the complicated battle in politics. The Arthurian legend is complex on its own, and I'm looking forward to more of this! Good luck on the development, you're doing great. <3
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I created an account just to leave a comment on this game haha. I ADORE this so far. I'm very excited to see what comes next. Such a subtle building of potential romantic tension, the more tender take on traditionally hyper-masculine characters, etc. Very big fan of this so far! <3
I'm not sure if anyone's caught this error already: Regardless of where you select for the scar to be, in the personal profile, it always says that it's across the knee.
I am enjoying this thus far and am excited for more!
Thanks so much for making this! I really love it so far. I hope its alright that we mentioned your story in our list of recommended twine games ^_^ it's especially good and deserves to be acknowledged! You can find it in the thread here--> https://itch.io/t/1910939/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-2
Hi❤ it's completely alright, in fact I am flattered by the mention!
Girl you are a gem! your list is fantastic >o<
thank you! <3
was a bit bothered reading an unpleasant post here in the comments, and just want to again express my appreciation for this story and its writer.
Ive loved reading tales of King Arthur and the Knights of the Round table since I was old enough to read. And as much as I loved reading them, I never thought I'd ever get to experience any of the tales the way others did, Imagining myself as the "queen" that Arthur was so In love with, Or as one of the Knights secretly involved with the queen or even the king himself! This story and another Im following (Bastard of Camelot) have really opened up that fantasy for me. Not only that but I think each is adding something new to the stories in their own way (as is traditional for every new Arthurian story, something new, or some twist that wasnt thought of before, that makes coming back over and over again to the same characters worth it.)
So again Id like to say thank you for sharing this with us. I really appreciate your effort and your take on the story.
Small problem, but, during the character creation, when you set your scar to be on your eyebrow, the personal profile states it as a "scar across your knee" instead
Being a lover of the "Arrow to the knee" meme, I find this hilarious
this is sooo good I can’t wait to read more :)
Is it okay to ask how much words overall this chapter has?
Sure! Together with the character creator, the whole chapter is around 23k words, with an average playthrough of 20k words.
hell ye! im about to spend an entire night for this! thank you for answering my question!
Not gonna lie, having King Arthur give me his pronouns......is cringe. lol also every choice I have made seems rather pointless.
You're very much free to read something else, then.
I will lol
Can't appercite a masterpiece that's on you,it's your loss but do learn some emphaty..honestly,its alright if doesn't sit well with your preferences but if you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all,you could have presented constructive crtisicm but no you have to take a tone that was both bigoted and demaning to both the writer and the community the wanted to create represention for..it wasnt cringe it was represtation and I for one appercited it piss off none likes a queerphobie
i just finished my first read of this - and it's amazing! it's a wonderful story and i cant wait to see where you take this story!
between this and the chosen one, which one is your main project?
Definitely this one! The Chosen One is basically on hiatus right now
well, at least 1 of my 2 favourite interactive novel are at full steam
thanks for sharing this with us. I just finished my second read through, this time with the added content. I can say that I both enjoyed alot of it, and yet at the same time had a hard time getting into the MC so to speak.
I tend to self insert in these kind of games, but I find it hard to "be" this character. Im uncomfortable playing a trained knight/killer type character. Im not martially or physically minded, in fact quiet the opposite. So this skin is hard for me to wear (it itches metaphorically speaking.) The forced wedding bit is something I can role play with, I'd just sullenly go along with it. But I find that even as a "mute" my character talks and responds too much to others. I dont think anyone really in that sort of position who was honestly unhappy about it, would just carry on casual banter like that. I could see my self responding with only hesitant head nods while keeping my eyes down cast, or looking away in refusal (or 180 degrees opposite and being sarcastic as all get out and generally unpleasant, but Im not that kind of person either.)
Not asking you to do anything about any of this, just sharing my experiences with the game so far. I knew when i first decided to give this a go that it was coming from an angle that I dont usually approach things from. Still Im glad to have read it, as honestly your writing is extremely well done and Im still hoping Ill find a way to get over my (character's) sullen self and find happiness in this unfortunate situation.
Hi! I saw your other post and I am very happy you are enjoying my take on the Arthurian legends❤
The difficulty you encountered as fas as immersion goes might take root in some pre-set traits the MC has. Some of them are due to the environment while growing up (for example MC is very capable in combat because they were intensly physically trained) and some of them are just character traits that are going to be fixed (for example MC's weakness for children and animals). Because of this, if sometimes you will come across some things that might feel strange to you, that's probably because it's one of the main character's fixed traits.
At this point in time MC is also still heavily influenced by their parents' expectations to go along with the marriage as best as they can; again, this is probably why you felt like MC was being too responsive or accepting. There are some choices for someone who just wants to get it over with without too much involvement (ex: choosing to eat alone and to not ask any question to Morien), maybe you'd be more comfortable with them?
In any case, thank you for your comments, your input is appreciated!
thanks for the response and insight. As I said I knew when i decided to play that it was with a MC that was somewhat preset in their origins, and that I would not be very comfortable with being that kind of person. Still I chose to play anyways, because well how can I pass on a chance to play an interactive Arthurian Tale lol.
Your story really is well written, and I've enjoyed it for the most part. I simply choose to ignore as best I can all references to my combat abilities / past etc. and focus on the Now part of the game (and i do like some of the characters predefined traits, like enjoying children and animals.) Its not too hard to do, its like playing an otome and ignoring all references to the MC being a girl. The mind can leap through alot of hoops when it wants to.
Forget the king. HELLO Knight 🤣
I've played this through a few times now - really enjoyed the release of the second half of the first chapter and I spent way too much time last night going through your tumblr reading all the info there. Love this so much, can't wait to see where you take it.
This is very good and i'm glad followed for the update but i have a question, for the option of a trans man can you only do binding or hormone treatments and not both? Otherwise this is very good and i'll wait excitedly for chapter 2!
Hi❤ I am so glad you liked the update! As for your question: I am probably going to add the option to do both in the next bugfix. Either that or it will be available in later chapter to choose to also take hormones if your MC binds and viceversa.
In any case, yes, it will be possible to do both!
Thank you for the clarification! Love your work and how caring you've made all the characters! There's no hate or drama with any of the characters and they all genuinely care for each other from the get-go and it's so nice to see! I hope you take as much time as you need to be happy with the next par that you put out and I'm excited to see what happens next!
Take care!
This is just my opinion, so I apologize if it upsets anyone but so far this story is just...
King Arthur and his knights are very feminine. Having the King, who just won a war, calling people dears, apologizing to servants and braiding peoples hair is a very strange thing to see.
So far every character is essentially the same, they're all lovey dovey and super caring. No one seems bothered by the child of their enemy they just defeated in war coming to their castle and marrying their king, everyone seems more content with making MC comfortable and happy
Alas this story is not for me, I can't take it seriously.
It's totally understandable to have preferences and in fact if something is not within your tastes you have every right to find something else that is!
Just to provide a possible explanation, I want to say that this story is not meant to be realistic. It is meant to address some tropes I hold dear to me and to portray character in a way I personally enjoy writing. Hopefully I can provide a different kind of experience than other stories with a similar setting.
In any case, TKH has soft characters that will always be understanding and attentive to MC's comfort, so anyone who keeps reading or is interested in this game should be aware of that.
ugghhh cant wait for more
The interactions between MC and everyone else are so heart warming.
Very well written so far, totally looking forward the next update <3
loved the first chapter so far :) looking foward to getting to know the characters more! definitely hooked.
It's still short but it gave me a taste of what I can expect from this IF and I'm liking it very much. I'll be waiting for future updates <3
love this so much, I can't wait for the full game.
Short and sweet. I'm hooked by your writing. I was hoping it was longer than half a chapter but it was so worth it. Good luck and please, please, PLEASE write more.
nice
I really don't like to be the generic guy in the comments but I'm falling in love with this demo. It's well polished and the flow of the story never really stumbles very wonderful read ^-^
Love it can't wait for the next update 😍
I simply absolutely love this ,I love the story so far ,I love the whole idea of it ,I cannot wait for moreeeee
wwwww marked! Awesome work!
I already love it! Can't wait to see more<3
I really enjoyed the story I wish you luck on the next chapter
nvm
Is from the ashes we rise playable now or will be in the future?, because you are actually the first person to let us be a dragon let alone a shape-shifting one. But I am really enjoying this game so far. Need more like those 2.
Great story I really look forward for next updates.
Some spoilers ahead ** I just wanna say please don't force this marriage on MC or make it a option to IDK be super loyal to him but not necessarily his spouse I know Arthur is a nice guy and probably won't force himself on MC but he probably needs a heir and the concept of having an affair if I don't like Arthur that way doesn't sit right with me.
Hi❤ thank you for leaving this comment because I'll hopefully be able to clarify some things to you.
While the arranged marriage isn't avoidable, in this setting is very common as a practice, especially for monarchs and nobles, this game will heavily drift away from the more uncomfortable sides of it.
There won't be any expectation of a children or pressures by the court because Arthur has already named his heir. Since MC is gender selectable, it is also taken into consideration that the marriage was never for the purpose of producing an heir.
On the topic of MC, they have the freedom to have a purely platonic relationship with Arthur. Should they choose to pursue other ROs, or no one at all, Arthur will be helpful and supportive either way. Basically, the bond that MC and Arthur have is set and will always be a strong and central point in the story, but not linked to Arthur's romance route!
you got me at 'train two beautiful hounds' but this is sooo good!!! I love to read more keep it up:DD
Can't wait your next update hehehe
The storyline and features are amazing! Looking forward for you next chapters!
i am totally embarrassed by the sheer amount of time i've spent at the chapter 1 screen not knowing that i have to press it. good game tho
Enthralling so far! These glimpses of the cast have me very keen to build a little found family out of them. Can't wait to see where it goes next!
the amount of customization this game has is amazing. It's only the first half of the first chapter, but man, i am totally floored by this demo! I really loved that there's an option for mc to know sign 😌 can't wait to read more o(╥﹏╥)o
Saw this last night in tumblr, but just recently had the time to try it out! And in all honesty, I love what we got to read right not. ^^ I love how heartwarming the story and characters are despite the story most likely going down the route of the complicated battle in politics. The Arthurian legend is complex on its own, and I'm looking forward to more of this! Good luck on the development, you're doing great. <3