I am absolutely in love with this concept and the writing! It's been around a year since the last update! It would be so sad if this is abandoned, but I really love coming back to play what's already here anyways.
There is a constant inconsistency with the hair length if I choose the shaven one. Every time after that mc does sm with their hair that makes sense with every other length but not the shaven one.
Hello Kal, I try to create an interactive fiction game but I am a rookie with HTML, CSS or JavaScript. You've made 'The Chosen One' with twine, I guess? Perhaps you could help me with some unsolved problems, to get also a design as good as yours. It would be very nice for me to hear from you! (raphael@artsunited.de) Thank you very much in advance! Best regards Raphael
Ahhhhhhh!! This is so good!! I especially love how... bitter the mc is, and how tired they are of having no control over their life. This is definitely one of my most anticipated ifs!
man, i already love this so much? i love how sharp the mc is, n it honestly feels p good to be playing such an overpowered character! also, the sense of isolation they feel from p much every other person in their lives? so good but i also just want to wrap them up in blankets n feed them soup
Congratulations you have made me cry at least two times already, which was very unexpected lol
I'm enjoying the story so far! Just to be clear, theres only one chapter released, right? I was a little confused since the text was orange but it wasn't clickable and theres not a "end of current demo" page.
Thank you for the review, I'm so happy you liked the story that much❤
Yes, the story ends there and it's actually the end of the first chapter. There should be a "end of the Demo" under the orange text but it's very small and for the next chapter I'll make the ending more clear!
I'm sorry but the MC gives off a schizophrenia disorder type of personality as well as constantly acting like an self entitle buffoon, I couldn't get into it sorry
Hi! From what I understands, this type of error seems to originate from your browser cookie setting.
You can try enabling all cookies for Itch.io, even from "unvisited" or "third party" sites in your browser's cookie settings, and refresh/reload the page, and that should allow the game to function as expected.
Let me know if you're still experiencing issues after that!
Hi! Haha, oh yes, MC complains a lot! I won't spoil anything, but the Journey will definitely affect that!
Unfortunately, you'll get to meet Rascia (the LI) only in chapter four - they will play a big part in MC's character developement so they have to be introduced at the right time. Though, if you want to read about them before that time you can find me on Tumblr where there are quite some scenarios that introduce the Healer and some cute or heated moments between them and MC!
Hey! Im not sure if its an error or intentional but after <It seems like a common theme, actually, between the Archmage's false sweetness,..., enough for even fifth-year students to think - and say - things like this.> the second option leads you to the same result as the first option
Hi! That is, in fact, deliberate since MC doesn't want to spare the kids another thought one way or another. But it confused more than one person so I might add a phrase to differentiate the two to avoid any misunderstanding!
Hi❤ I'm so glad you liked it, expecially MC's personality since it's something I want to do a bit differently than other IFs. Can't wait to share more!
I'm so glad you liked MC so far❤ as of now things between them and the Mentor are not going so well, but I can assure you that MC will get a lot of hugs from Rascia (the Healer, wich is the only LI)!
Oh my gosh, this game was so fun to play through! I'm incredibly interested in the lore as well as the characters so far, and very excited to see where this goes!
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I am absolutely in love with this concept and the writing! It's been around a year since the last update! It would be so sad if this is abandoned, but I really love coming back to play what's already here anyways.
abandoned???
They have like 3 or 4 projects started so i would say it's on the back burner
I understand... Thanks for saying🥰🩷
There is a constant inconsistency with the hair length if I choose the shaven one. Every time after that mc does sm with their hair that makes sense with every other length but not the shaven one.
But great start and keep up the good work!!!!
Hello Kal, I try to create an interactive fiction game but I am a rookie with HTML, CSS or JavaScript. You've made 'The Chosen One' with twine, I guess? Perhaps you could help me with some unsolved problems, to get also a design as good as yours. It would be very nice for me to hear from you! (raphael@artsunited.de) Thank you very much in advance! Best regards Raphael
I am obsessed, time to blast some music and daydream this for the next week.
What does LI mean?
love interest
Love Interest/LI
I love both MC and LI! I can't wait for them to meet! 🥰
Ahhhhhhh!! This is so good!! I especially love how... bitter the mc is, and how tired they are of having no control over their life. This is definitely one of my most anticipated ifs!
man, i already love this so much? i love how sharp the mc is, n it honestly feels p good to be playing such an overpowered character! also, the sense of isolation they feel from p much every other person in their lives? so good but i also just want to wrap them up in blankets n feed them soup
I hate the mc
Have you decided to reopen and keep it public, then? Since I saw that you had made it private due to it being too personal for you.
I looooove it!!! Oh, I have a little question, you will continue the story or is in hiatus?
What's the point in making the Hero gender selectable if they aren't a LI
Actually you're quite right. Right now am leaning more towards aligning the Hero's gender with the Chosen One's than making it selectable.
I'll probably come to a decision and update the game page with the next chapter.
Congratulations you have made me cry at least two times already, which was very unexpected lol
I'm enjoying the story so far! Just to be clear, theres only one chapter released, right? I was a little confused since the text was orange but it wasn't clickable and theres not a "end of current demo" page.
Thank you for the review, I'm so happy you liked the story that much❤
Yes, the story ends there and it's actually the end of the first chapter. There should be a "end of the Demo" under the orange text but it's very small and for the next chapter I'll make the ending more clear!
Loved the demo!
But just to be clear, there is only one LI for the MC or naw? (Not that I mind but I am just curious. Hehehe)
I'm very glad you liked the first chapter!
Yes, Rascia (the Healer) will be the only LI!
I'm sorry but the MC gives off a schizophrenia disorder type of personality as well as constantly acting like an self entitle buffoon, I couldn't get into it sorry
Ah, your Tumblr seems to have been deleted.
when i try to run the game it shows me an error: no valid storage adapters found :/
Hi! From what I understands, this type of error seems to originate from your browser cookie setting.
You can try enabling all cookies for Itch.io, even from "unvisited" or "third party" sites in your browser's cookie settings, and refresh/reload the page, and that should allow the game to function as expected.
Let me know if you're still experiencing issues after that!
it still doesn't work unfortunately
Loved the story so far though I'm a little disappointed that I didn't get to meet Li
just one thing MC complains a lot about everything and I mean a LOT!! Hopefully this trip ahead will reduce its amount 😊
Hi! Haha, oh yes, MC complains a lot! I won't spoil anything, but the Journey will definitely affect that!
Unfortunately, you'll get to meet Rascia (the LI) only in chapter four - they will play a big part in MC's character developement so they have to be introduced at the right time. Though, if you want to read about them before that time you can find me on Tumblr where there are quite some scenarios that introduce the Healer and some cute or heated moments between them and MC!
Hey! Im not sure if its an error or intentional but after <It seems like a common theme, actually, between the Archmage's false sweetness,..., enough for even fifth-year students to think - and say - things like this.> the second option leads you to the same result as the first option
Hi! That is, in fact, deliberate since MC doesn't want to spare the kids another thought one way or another. But it confused more than one person so I might add a phrase to differentiate the two to avoid any misunderstanding!
i see! thanks for the explanation
Love this start very cool and interesting and make me excited for more
I'm so happy to hear it, darling❤
Omg, the mc's personality is very interesting! The world building is just woww! Can't wait for the next chapter XD
Hi❤ I'm so glad you liked it, expecially MC's personality since it's something I want to do a bit differently than other IFs. Can't wait to share more!
already got me in the feels, hero needs another hug badly, hope they get it.
can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm so glad you liked MC so far❤ as of now things between them and the Mentor are not going so well, but I can assure you that MC will get a lot of hugs from Rascia (the Healer, wich is the only LI)!
great to hear, looking forward to it.
I can't wait to read more of your story! It was a nice start!
Thank you! I'm already starting to work on the second chapter!
Oh my gosh, this game was so fun to play through! I'm incredibly interested in the lore as well as the characters so far, and very excited to see where this goes!
Thank you!❤ I'm so glad you liked it, I have a lot planned fo this project!